Tuesday, 8 November 2011

Feedback for another groups rough cut

- needs to establish sexuality, can be confusing for the viewer seeing two males sing about love and sex, and seeing no female character. NEED TO SEE FEMALE to avoid homoerotic connotations.

- Pointless shots. e.g shot of horse running in a field.  has no link to the music video. can be confusing for the viewer to establish unnecessary shots. (GOODWIN)

- effective lip syncing, although not perfect at parts.

- appropriate performance - but could be more enthusiastic.

- Good shots. High angle, Low angle, tracking shot, pan and zoom were used well.

- Quicker cuts in editing would suit the music video well.

- Unfinished.

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